http://lofit.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] lofit.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] literen 2011-07-01 05:54 am (UTC)

Easily one of the best AU stories I have ever read! ^^

It's plotless, cute, fluffy, adorable and all the things the powerpuff girls are made of. Fantastic!

The only complaint I have is that your tenses are a bit jumbled up, so I got lost trying to figure out if it happened in the past or not. I'm really not used to present tense writing. :P

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